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a desperate soulHold me, soul
hold me
kiss me
look into my eyes---

this is me

eye of the tiger,
eye of the storm.

My soul,
my bleeding heart
my pleads.

fight for your soul

this is me

what could be
better than you?

hold me,
sir knight....
Closed Windows
Into closed windows
As worry laughed
Move!
Ablaze with excitement
Smiling...
And even bereavement evaporated
A hand still raised
Murmured, as her scar pained,
"All was well..."
A survivor of a stormsurvivors- let me tell you my story,
[of] yesterday and today,
.... LIFE and d-e-a-t-h.

No one understands the storm,
Me and my misery;
we all have our demons
we're all abusers--- survivors.

It's all in my head,
pain-
words-
war-
my suicide.

It's all in my head;
sometimes
Blurry    I'm
     such
          a
            fucking
                    mess
  and my best bet is drinking  s
                                            t
                                              r
                                            a
                                            i
                                              g
                                            h
                                             t
        from the bottle to feel good but
I just feel worse.
    so close the coffin to end this sad story and
throw me in the back of a black hearse.
   My heart rate is up and my
feelings are ex
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Living Dead Or Dead Living?by ~MikalaLD

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So.... Confusion for life's ways... Pain and heartbreak... All mixed into a few lines. Everything is a two-sided sword. You can't push without pulling away somewhere...

Anyway, tell me what you think, please.
©2012-2013 ~MikalaLD
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~graveseller Mar 6, 2012
Well life can come at you both ways. Like a saberstaff, if you know were one blade is then you know were the other is, however if you are not carfull you will hurt yourself. For it can be a difficult weapon to master. however, if you can mater it then you have a way of taking life from both sides. :)

Whanderful poem.
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~MikalaLD Mar 6, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you for your kind words. :)
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~graveseller Mar 6, 2012
Well i did not mean to sound corny but thats waht came to mind.
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~MikalaLD Mar 6, 2012  Student Writer
I know. And you didn't sound corny at all. That's why I was thanking you.
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~graveseller Mar 6, 2012
The pleasure should be yours. awhile back that was how i felt:
Hollow, like i was the tin man. May wounds have turned too scars and have not fully healed but i learned from that experiance and even thought she broke/shattered my heart i still thank of her somtimes.
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~MikalaLD Mar 6, 2012  Student Writer
I'm kinda going through that right now with my boyfriend. It can get rough.
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~graveseller Mar 6, 2012
I am so sorry for you lose, im sort of new to the whole relationships thing but you must have had it rougher then i did.
To be honest, i begged her not to go and i was so scared of losing that i cried.
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~MikalaLD Mar 6, 2012  Student Writer
We were/are having issues, but he thinks their all in my head. He wont believe that something may be wrong. I've cried so many times over it. And everyone keeps telling me to just break up with him, but it's not that easy...
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~rocklee1111 Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You know I can't stop reading this. I've been reading it for a while I love it. You're a beautiful poet writer Mikala keep it up :)
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~MikalaLD Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you, Rob. :)
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