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Broken hearts, un/locked doors,
Tired souls, (tired of) fighting for purchase,
Lost/found, love/hate, sadness/fear,
Living dead or dead living,
Cracking, or fractured?
A person breaks/heals.
We (continue to) fight/give up.
A heart beats/stops.
Un/broken doors, locked hearts.
So.... Confusion for life's ways... Pain and heartbreak... All mixed into a few lines. Everything is a two-sided sword. You can't push without pulling away somewhere...

Anyway, tell me what you think, please.
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graveseller Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Well life can come at you both ways. Like a saberstaff, if you know were one blade is then you know were the other is, however if you are not carfull you will hurt yourself. For it can be a difficult weapon to master. however, if you can mater it then you have a way of taking life from both sides. :)

Whanderful poem.
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you for your kind words. :)
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graveseller Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Well i did not mean to sound corny but thats waht came to mind.
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Student Writer
I know. And you didn't sound corny at all. That's why I was thanking you.
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graveseller Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
The pleasure should be yours. awhile back that was how i felt:
Hollow, like i was the tin man. May wounds have turned too scars and have not fully healed but i learned from that experiance and even thought she broke/shattered my heart i still thank of her somtimes.
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Student Writer
I'm kinda going through that right now with my boyfriend. It can get rough.
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graveseller Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
I am so sorry for you lose, im sort of new to the whole relationships thing but you must have had it rougher then i did.
To be honest, i begged her not to go and i was so scared of losing that i cried.
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Student Writer
We were/are having issues, but he thinks their all in my head. He wont believe that something may be wrong. I've cried so many times over it. And everyone keeps telling me to just break up with him, but it's not that easy...
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rocklee1111 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You know I can't stop reading this. I've been reading it for a while I love it. You're a beautiful poet writer Mikala keep it up :)
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you, Rob. :)
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rocklee1111 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome Mika :)
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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rocklee1111 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) Are you planning on writing anymore poems?
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
Well, of course. I just don't know what to write about at the moment.
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rocklee1111 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wohoo :) Can't wait, and I hope you think of something. Do you have any advice for writing poems?
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
Just write what you feel. Don't mince words. Write it all down. Then try to find a way to describe what you're feeling as a picture.

"The dark shadows of my moon only allow me to see the brightness of the star you are" ...Admiration.

Does that help?
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luvrheart Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
Just like me :(
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Student Writer
Oh, hun. No it's not.
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Student Writer
i like good job :) loving the dichotomies presented the forward slashes are unique dont really that much in poetry well done
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Student Writer
:) i did :) feel free to check out some of my work if you like
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Student Writer
Okay, sure. :)
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Student Writer
:) let me know what you think :)
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Student Writer
I will. :)
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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