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You can't protect me forever.
Let me pass through those doors,
See if they can sever
This thing from me.

As the time continues to tick,
And you continue to wait,
Let's hope they make the end quick.
Snip, snip, snip.

This is deep within me,
Each root holds a memory.
This broken feeling
Is all that will ever be.

The clock even grown impatient,
Waiting for the end.
No longer radiant...
Tear, tear, tear.

The child leaves the room alone,
Relieved and tired.
The doctor's intelligence shone.
It's over now.

"It's okay, sweetheart. I'm here."
But the pain still burns.
And this shines brighter than ever- fear.
Gone, gone, gone.
There's no explanation to this one. Find out on your own.
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Doodelay Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Student Writer
read this earlier today and forgot to come back to it. <3
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Student Writer
I'm glad you seem to like it. Thanks for faving a lot of my work.
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:icondoodelay:
Doodelay Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Student Writer
its all in the quality to my dear lol
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:iconmikalald:
MikalaLD Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Student Writer
And thank you for another compliment. :)
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graveseller Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
It sounds to me that you have experianced a great lose. But it seems that you are getting though it with the assistnice of people who who to help you although it appears difficult. And now you are afraid what might happen now. This and the title reminds me of the song "Pain" by Three Days Grace.
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MikalaLD Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Student Writer
That's a good song. But no, that's not what this poem is about.
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:icongraveseller:
graveseller Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
Then, if you do not mind my asking, what is it about?.
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